{"id":28767,"date":"2019-02-28T08:00:50","date_gmt":"2019-02-28T13:00:50","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/blogs.publishersweekly.com\/blogs\/shelftalker\/?p=28767"},"modified":"2019-02-28T08:00:50","modified_gmt":"2019-02-28T13:00:50","slug":"the-rights-and-wrongs-of-taglines","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/blogs.publishersweekly.com\/blogs\/shelftalker\/?p=28767","title":{"rendered":"The Rights and Wrongs of Taglines"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Most YA taglines are not so bad. Unfortunately so, since<em> The Scarlet Pimpernell<\/em> is right in observing that &#8220;there is nothing quite so bad as something which is not so bad.&#8221; Great books deserve great taglines and when they don&#8217;t have them it is a miss. Take the tagline for Sally Green&#8217;s <em>The Smoke Thieves. <\/em><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><em>&#8220;Revenge. Romance.<\/em><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><em>Power. Money. Magic.<\/em><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><em>Which one are you fighting for?&#8221;<\/em><\/p>\n<p>Personally it is none of the above. I&#8217;m fighting for a catchier tagline. There is a lot to be said, after all, for a memorable one. An example of a truly great one is <em>Grave Mercy<\/em>&#8216;s &#8220;Why be a sheep when you can be the wolf?&#8221; I also commend <em>Cinder<\/em>&#8216;s &#8220;Even in the future, the story begins with Once Upon a Time\u2026&#8221; and <em>The Beginning of Everything<\/em>&#8216;s great tagline, &#8220;Everyone Gets a Tragedy.&#8221; I love that. It&#8217;s both true and totally apropos to the book.<br \/>\n<!--more--><br \/>\nThe other day I was struck by a different tagline issue, having encountered the following in Edelweiss.<br \/>\n<a href=\"http:\/\/wordpress.publishersweekly.com\/blogs\/shelftalker\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/02\/death2-1.jpg\"><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-28770\" src=\"http:\/\/wordpress.publishersweekly.com\/blogs\/shelftalker\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/02\/death2-1.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"1000\" height=\"1514\" \/><\/a>The book comes out in May but what struck me was the deja vu I got from looking at its tagline, &#8220;Death was only the beginning.&#8221; I remembered a good book I&#8217;d encountered last year on the Indie&#8217;s Introduce panel &#8230;<br \/>\n<a href=\"http:\/\/wordpress.publishersweekly.com\/blogs\/shelftalker\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/02\/death1-1.jpg\"><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-28772\" src=\"http:\/\/wordpress.publishersweekly.com\/blogs\/shelftalker\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/02\/death1-1.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"900\" height=\"1350\" \/><\/a>I did a quick search and found that this was a well worn tagline.<br \/>\n<a href=\"http:\/\/wordpress.publishersweekly.com\/blogs\/shelftalker\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/02\/death5-1.jpg\"><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-28768\" src=\"http:\/\/wordpress.publishersweekly.com\/blogs\/shelftalker\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/02\/death5-1.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"333\" height=\"500\" \/><\/a><a href=\"http:\/\/wordpress.publishersweekly.com\/blogs\/shelftalker\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/02\/death3-1.jpg\"><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-28771\" src=\"http:\/\/wordpress.publishersweekly.com\/blogs\/shelftalker\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/02\/death3-1.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"259\" height=\"400\" \/><\/a><a href=\"http:\/\/wordpress.publishersweekly.com\/blogs\/shelftalker\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/02\/death4-1.jpg\"><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-28769\" src=\"http:\/\/wordpress.publishersweekly.com\/blogs\/shelftalker\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/02\/death4-1.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"533\" height=\"583\" \/><\/a>This raised an issue for me. Should a tagline be book specific, or should one tagline be used for multiple titles? The same title is sometimes duplicated, of course, and I&#8217;m not suggesting that is a crime to re-use a tagline, but perhaps they should really be unique to a particular book. Some taglines would be impossible to re-use of course, like this one for<em> Ember in the Ashes, &#8220;<\/em>Laia is a slave. Elias is a soldier. Neither is free.&#8221; Good luck appropriating that one.<br \/>\nDoes it come down to applicability? Take the great tagline of <em>Across the Universe:<\/em> &#8220;What does it take to survive aboard a spaceship fueled by lies?&#8221; It is not broadly applicable but, as <a href=\"https:\/\/bookriot.com\/2016\/09\/06\/can-you-match-these-taglines-to-their-ya-books\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">BookRiot rightly pointed out<\/a>, there are certainly other space opera sci-fi fantasies it could work for. At the same time it is such a distinctive phrase that it would be plagiarism to appropriate it ,I think. &#8220;Death is only the beginning&#8221; and <em>&#8220;<\/em>Revenge. Romance. Power. Money. Magic<em>. <\/em><em>Which one are you fighting for?&#8221; <\/em>are a lot more applicable, and also a good deal more nebulous than the tagline from <em>Across the Universe<\/em>, for example. Does it come down to the relative ease in which a tagline can be re-used or is it just a bad practice all around?* I do think it&#8217;s a bad practice but I&#8217;d love to hear your take on it. Also, if you have a stand out favorite tagline please share it in the comments!<br \/>\n*It should be noted that the re-use of taglines is probably prone to parallel evolution, meaning any given case might be done without knowledge that the same tagline has been used before.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Is re-using a tagline bad practice or are they fair game?<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":8,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-28767","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-uncategorized"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.publishersweekly.com\/blogs\/shelftalker\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/28767","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.publishersweekly.com\/blogs\/shelftalker\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.publishersweekly.com\/blogs\/shelftalker\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.publishersweekly.com\/blogs\/shelftalker\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/8"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.publishersweekly.com\/blogs\/shelftalker\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=28767"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.publishersweekly.com\/blogs\/shelftalker\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/28767\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.publishersweekly.com\/blogs\/shelftalker\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=28767"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.publishersweekly.com\/blogs\/shelftalker\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=28767"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.publishersweekly.com\/blogs\/shelftalker\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=28767"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}